Task Description:
Near the end of Term 1, Room 5 learned about different types of poetry and parodies using the 'This is just to say' template. Here is an example below.
Here is a completed poem from one of our students, Maty. I hope you enjoy!
This is just to say
By Williams Carlos and Maty Macpherson
I have taken
the chocolates
that were in
the fridge
and which
you were
probably
saving
for dessert
Forgive me
they were
tempting
so yummy
and so extraordinary
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ReplyDeleteHi its Kohen here, I really like the poem. maybe next time you could do you reading the poem if you would like?
ReplyDeleteHi it's Miro G from Paroa School. This is a cool way of doing poetry! I would definitely take the chocolate from the fridge! Yum!
ReplyDeleteThanks and bye!
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ReplyDeleteHi im Harry from Paroa school.
ReplyDeleteThese Poems are so cool.when I read this I tried to make one but I couldnt!so good job on working hard.If I was there i would take the choclates too!
Bye -Harry
Hi its liam i really like your poem. My favourite part was at the start. good job
ReplyDeletehi its hunter from paroa school. I really like this poem.
ReplyDeleteHi, I'm Emma from Paroa school.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very cool poem.
To be BTB (Better Than Before you could put some more words in that rhym
But other than that it was great, Bye.
Hi, It's Clara from Paroa school. I love poetry and I really like how you did it! I think the way you guys did it is a really good way to get better at poetry. I really love and I think they are perfect I don't really think you can improve on anything because these are amazing
ReplyDeletegood job
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